Friday 24 February 2012

Nick's narrative

Here are some basic points about the narrative style and the way characters are developed:



  • The role of Nick as the narrator is fundamental to the narrative style of the story.  Gatsby’s character is ‘filtered’ through Nick Carraway’s narration.
  • However, Nick himself, becomes a figure whom we must interpret.  As Nick tells us the story and we piece together our interpretation of Gatsby, we are also inevitably adjusting our sense of who the man is telling Gatsby’s story.
  • Nick is able to comment on, and pass judgement on the events around him with the involved immediacy of a first-person voice.

  • Narrating the story from Nick’s perspective could have resulted in a monotonous voice.  This is avoided by having Nick recreate dramatic exchanges as dialogue; he recreates the voices of the characters he encounters.
  • Rather than telling the story in terms of Nick’s personal musings, Fitzgerald ensures that his narrator produces dramatic reconstructions in a series of linked scenes; this is called the scenic method.
  • Whilst the scenes are relatively self-contained, there is elaborate cross-reference between the scenes.
  • Invariably, Nick lets the dialogue stand without comment, leaving it to the readers to weigh the significance of what is said.


  • Fitzgerald was writing at a time when cinema was becoming popular and this seems to have had an influence on the structure of his novel.  There are lots of ‘cuts’ between scenes, which are symptomatic of a cinematic style.
  • Descriptions often alternate between a type of ‘wide-angle’ panoramic shot (Gatsby’s parties) and close-up.


  • It is difficult, in this novel, to regard objects as objects pure and simple.  There are a variety of different objects that takes on a significance above and beyond the literal; the car, for example, represents more than a vehicle for physical mobility.
  • Fitzgerald often uses familiar associations of symbols in an ironic way; the colour green is not used to represent traditional associations such as fertility, growth and lushness.  Instead, the electric green light at the end of the Buchanan’s implies jealousy and envy (Gatsby’s envy of Tom’s marriage to Daisy).


·         Words and phrases recur regularly but the situation in which they are used changes their meanings.  For example, the familiar associations of the colour white are modified as the words appear in different contexts.  White is applied to the ‘palaces’ of the wealthy, to the ‘ashen dust’ that coats Wilson’s clothes and to Daisy’s ‘white’ girlhood.  Clearly, images of ‘whiteness’ have different meanings in these different situations.

·         Other recurring references include those to flowers, clothing, sight & vision, accidents and carelessness.

  • Characters are not presented in an objective, definitive way.  Fitzgerald is interested in the different ways in which characters perceive other characters.  Carraway’s viewpoint dominates the novel but we are not allowed to forget that other interpretations are possible.
  • Buchanan’s view of Gatsby and Henry C Gatz’s view of his son show how fundamentally different views of a single individual may be.
  • Nick is engaged in a process of interpreting characters and their motivation but his interpretations are, in themselves, difficult to assess.  For example, his opinions on Gatsby change from one sentence to the next.
  • Characterisation is developed through nuance, suggestion and hints.

The Great Gatsby Chapter 7


Thursday 23 February 2012

The Great Gatsby Plan: Analyse the significance of references to songs in the novel

Analyse the significance of references to songs in the novel

The Sheik Of Araby
  • The song talks about a captured bride. The night before her wedding, Daisy received a letter from Gatsby which lead her to call of the wedding.  This implies that Daisy's love really belongs to Gatsby.
  • The music is fast paced and lively, reflecting the hedonistic lifestyle the characters in the novel lead.
  • Before the lyrics, Jordan spoke of the love Daisy and Gatsby had, and after the lyrics explains the Gatsby moved to be closer to Daisy. This shows that he wants to be close to her, and will go to great lengths to display his lover for her.

Ain't we got fun
  • These lyrics talk about enjoying life, and reflects the hedonistic lifestyle seen in the novel. 
  • "The rich get richer" implies that Gatsby is getting richer in emotions now that he has been reunited with Daisy. 
  • "The poor get children" implies that Daisy is poor emotionally in her marriage with Tom who she has not had a child with. 
  • The lyrics also act as a mouth piece for Fitzgerald who believe that the youth were lively and fun.



The Love Nest
  • The lyrics show that Daisy is not sure if she should leave her safe and secure, materialistic relationship with Tom for an intimate relationship with Gatsby in which she can have pride in.
  • "love inside" shows that Daisy now needs to consider her feelings as opposed to her appearance and opinions of other people.

The Great Gatsby Essay Plan

Using the car journey in Chapter Four as a starting point, assess if the reader gets to see the real Gatsby in the novel.

Introduction
Many sides to Gatsby are seen, mainly through Nick but also Jordan's perspective.
Chapter Four is structured in three parts, each showing a different side to Gatsby.
Many sides are seen, suggesting that one side must be the true Gatsby but it is not clear which.

Paragraph One
In Chapter Four Nick lists guests at Gatsby's party. This makes the account appear more reliable so we, as the reader, are more likely to trust his assumptions and accounts of Gatsby.
Earlier in the novel it was revealed that Gatsby held these extravagant parties in hope of finding Daisy. This shows an obsessed and romantic side to him.
Gatsby is rarely seen at the parties, implying he is hiding like he is hiding the truth about himself. 
The behaviour of his guests appear to be dark and sinister. For example, one man "strangled his wife". This emphasises the darkness beneath the hedonistic lifestyle and implies that Gatsby his hiding a sinister side to his personality.

Paragraph Two
The sinister side to Gatsby is further implied in the second part of the chapter when Myer Wolfshiem is introduced.
A sinister side to Wolfshiem is implied when he says "filled with faces dead and gone" suggesting crime. 
They have lunch in the "half darkness" suggesting shady dealings and beneath Gatsby's innocence is a life of crime which has funded the lifestyle he now lives. This makes the rumors such as "he killed a man" appear more realistic.
It is clear that Nick is uncomfortable in Wolfshiem's presence and asks questions "innocently" showing that he does not live a life of crime. This implies that he thinks negatively of Wolfshiem and therefore may try and show a negative side to Gatsby.

Paragraph Three
Jordan's first person narrative shows a romantic side to Gatsby. 
She says Gatsby "looked at Daisy while she was speaking in a way every young girl wants to be looked at". This implies Gatsby's adoration for Daisy and suggests how romantic he was. It also implies that he was the person every girl dreamed of.
Gatsby writing to Daisy the day before he wedding shows that he never stopped loving her. 
Gatsby was not able to tell Nick his past himself, and it is possible that he told Jordan a fake story. however, it is evident that there is a history between Gatsby and Daisy. 

Conclusion
Two main sides to Gatsby are seen-romantic and criminal.
From Jordan's story, Gatsby did not appear to have any links to crime suggesting that the real Gatsby is romantic. He became associated with crime in order to gain more money and to lead a more extravagant lifestyle which he feels in needed to please Daisy.

Wednesday 22 February 2012

Kite Runner, chapter 17

SUMMARY: The narrative switches back to Amir after Rahim Khan narrates the previous chapter. He hands a letter to Amir, from Hassan which describes some of the horrors of Afghanistan. Amir learns that the Taliban have shot Hassan and his wife, in order to obtain his father's house. Rahim Khan asks Amir to go and get Hassan's son from the orphanage he has been staying at. Amir finds out that Hassan is his half brother.

ANALYSIS.
Chapter seventeen's narrative changes back to Amir after it being Rahim Khan's voice that tells the story through chapter sixteen.This allows the reader to finally see Amir's thoughts after being held in suspense throughout Rahim Khan's narrative.

Uniquely, chapter 17 uses a epistolary narrative to tell the story (Hassan's letter). This technique gives the reader a better and more reliable, account of the horrors of Afghanistan than Amir can provide, as Hassan's account is first hand. This technique also builds suspense, as the reader still doesn't know what has become of Hassan.

When the reader does finally learn of Hassan's death, Hosseini uses broken and repetitive narrative to convey Amir's disbelief, and adds FURTHER suspense. Towards the end of the chapter, Amir's character repeatedly uses curse words . Hosseini very rarely swears in his narrative, so it draws the reader's interest and illustrates Amir's anger.

The Kite Runner-Chapter 22

Summary:
-Amir arrives at a large house in his old neighbourhood, in accordance with his arrangement to meet with the "Talib"
-Amir is conducted into the house, searched and left alone in a room
-The man in white enters, he and Amir talk about the stoning, viewing Amir's lack of enthusiasm the "Talib" recounts his part in the massacre of the Hazaras at Mazir
-Amir mentions Sohrab and how he is "here for" him, to the "Talib", who is eventually called for and forced to dance
-The "Talib" reveals himself as Assef
-Assef tells Amir how he came to hold his current position
-Assef asks why Amir wants Sohrab, but Amir refuses to tell him
-Assef allows Amir to take Sohrab, on the condition that they finish their childhood fight
-Amir gets beaten to within an inch of his life, to be saved by Sohrab with his slingshot, in an echo of Hassan

Analysis:
Chapter twenty-two represents a kind of purgatory for the main protagonist, Amir, within the novel. One could argue that this chapter represents the cyclic nature of the novel, in the repetition of events. Hosseini manipulates Amir into nervous action; seemingly casual movements that delineate the fear, and in some respects the anticipation, that Amir experiences lying in wait for the “Talib”, visible within short sentences, for instance in “I crossed my legs. Uncrossed them”. In these lines, Amir's inner tension is evident.

Amir’s isolation within the house is emphasised by his self-absorption, the way in which he studies the objects surrounding him. One such object that is described by Hosseini is the coffee table; on which are “walnut sized brass balls”, this depiction is a form of foreshadowing, however it could be argued that this mention appears contrived from some reader perspectives.

Through Amir, Hosseini explores the Talib’s appearance in comparison to the other occupants of the room. In terms of colouring, he is labelled as “much paler” than the other two men, and so different in origin. His clothing is also depicted; by Amir in finding fascination in bloodstains left by participation in the stoning, the blood on this stark white clothing could have connotations of butchery. The Talib’s dialogue reinforces the visibility of a vicious nature, so viewed in previous chapters (i.e. public stoning), in the recounting of achievements “We’d shoot them right there in front of their families” massacring Hazaras.

Upon meeting Sohrab, Amir comments on the similarities between father and son, referring to Sohrab’s facial structure as the “Chinese doll face of my childhood” in reference to Hassan. Sohrab’s features act as a physical reminder of what Hassan experienced earlier in the novel. This is reflected in the Talib’s identity; Assef. It is almost fitting that in a country broken in pieces, he has come to a position of power, Assef himself becomes a later characterisation of Hitler, “doing God’s work".

There is symmetry in the way that Amir reiceves the beating, a relation to Assef in it. As Assef laughed during his own in passing a painful kidney stone, so Amir laughs in his pain. He finally collects his due, and in doing so expels his guilt and inner turmoil. The circle is completed when he is rescued from death by Sohrab, releases a slingshot containing one of the brass balls into Assef's eye, in an action that almost replicates his father's (Hassan's) decades before.

The Kite Runner - Chapter 8

Key Events
  • Trip to Jalalabad
  • Amir and Baba’s facade of an idyllic relationship ends
  • Scene under the pomegranate tree
  • Amir's birthday party
How does Hosseini tell the story?

Hosseini uses irony to portray the characters feelings and the consequences of their actions. Amir allows the rape to occur and does not act as he thinks that bringing the kite back will ultimately win Baba’s love and affection, and in some part it does; Baba takes him to Jalalabad and boasts about his sons achievements and throws him a party. However, Amir is so consumed with his guilt at his inaction that he is unable to enjoy and appreciate his father’s love and that guilt eventually alienates him from his father.

A sense of isolation, or self-isolation, is presented in Amir. Hosseini achieves this by contrasting Amir against chaos. For example, when Amir goes to Jalalabad, Hosseini describes the vast number of family members that go with them that ‘filled three vans’ all ‘talking loudly and at the same time’. This contrasts Amir admitting that he saw Hassan get raped but saying it ‘no one’.

The allegory of the monster in the lake is referenced. At first it could be considered that Hassan made up the dream in order to make Amir feel better. However, after chapter 7 the dream takes on a new literal meaning. While it could be interpreted that Assef is the monster in the lake, it could also be seen as Amir being the monster in the lake as he refuses to confront the events of that day. Amir even acknowledges that ‘There was a monster in the lake... I was that monster’

Hosseini also uses symbolism to convey relationships. The pomegranate tree with the words ‘Amir and Hassan, the sultans of Kabul’ inscribed on it represents the closeness and strength of their friendship. However, when Amir pelts Hassan with pomegranates this effectively ends or ‘crushes’ their relationship and when Amir returns to Kabul in 2001 he finds the tree is nearly dead and unable to bear fruit. This indicates the death of Hassan and Amir’s relationship but as the tree is still alive, there is still potential to make amends in the form of Sohrab.

Important Quotations
  • "I watched Hassan get raped," I said to no one'
  • 'There was a monster in the lake... I was that monster'
  • "Hassan's not going anywhere... This is his home and we're his family."
  • 'Hassan was smeared in red like he'd been shot by a firing squad' - foreshadowing of Hassan's death

Tuesday 21 February 2012

The Kite Runner – Chapter 23

The Kite Runner – Chapter 23
Key events:
·         Amir is in and out of consciousness realising his lip is split.
·         Amir has a vision of Baba wrestling the bear and realises that Amir is wrestling the bear.
·         Rahim Khan’s letter explaining how what he did was wrong but he must not be too hard on himself.
·         Amir discovers he is more like his Father than he thought and begins to learn that Baba redeemed himself by ‘ feeding the poor on the streets, building the orphanidge, giving money to friends in need’. Through Rahim khans writing he inspires Amir that in order to redeem himself he must act upon it.
·         Amir discovers that the orphanidge in America was made-up.
How does Hosseini tell the story?
·         Using Amir’s injury’s to symbolise the atonement of not only Amir physically slowly healing but also slowly healing his wrongdoings showing the beginning of Amir’s journey of redeeming himself. Also the use of dialogue from the surrounding doctors emphasises this healing process both mentally and physically when he says (referring to Amir’s lip) ‘you will have an excellent result, though there will be a scar. That is unavoidable’

·         Narrative voices, replacing Amir’s voice (because he can’t physically speak without suffering) we get to observe the surroundings through multi-sensory description; referring to Amir’s physical suffering, and what he can see through his bruised eyes. Also through Rahim Khan’s letter Hosseini shows a great deal of foreshadowing through phrases such as ‘guilt leads to good’.

·         Hosseini manipulates time to signify importance of events through the use of Amir’s short bursts of consciousness, informing the reader only information they need to know without elaborating. He does this in short paragraphs, showing the fast flowing events that occur leading onto the following chapter.
·         There is a huge use of symbolism throughout both chapters 22 and 23. In chapter 23 Amir’s lip has great significance. Amir’s lip is split ‘in two, clean down the middle’ represents the split in afghan society. The social hierarchy that Amir was blissfully unaware arguably until Farid the taxi driver points out that afghan is split ‘in two’ and Amir has ‘always been a tourist’ to his own country. His country split into two sides, the rich and the poor. Amir is represented as the ‘socially legitimate half, the half that represented the riches he had inherited’ and Hassan, as well as Farid children representing the poor hazara’s ; who struggle work long physical days just to earn enough money to provide small amounts of food and no materialistic items that Amir was so used to growing up with.
The split lip also represents Baba’s emotional and moral characteristics towards his two sons and his role as a father being ‘torn between two half’s’ Amir and Hassan.
His split lip may also represent Amir’s symbol of atonement, symbolising that for the first time he stood up for his morals, for the last part of Hassan remaining- Sohrab. This scar will stay with him forever and is a turning point in the novel as from this point on he continues to redeem himself.

Plan: Contrast the portrayal of Gatsby in chapter 5 and in the rest of the novel

Plan: Contrast the portrayal of Gatsby in chapter 5 and in the rest of the novel
Introduction
- Chapter 5 is the first point in the novel in which we see an insecure, materialistic side to Gatsby, and it becomes apparent that this side of him becomes more prominent when Daisy is present.
- It is also obvious that whilst Daisy brings out some of his worst qualities - such as his materialism, extravagance and insecurity - she also introduces us as readers to some of his more loving, caring tendencies.
- It could be argued then that the contrasting portrayals of Gatsby in chapter 5 and the rest of novel serve to emphasize the effect this reunion with Daisy has on him, and highlight the importance that building a relationship with her has to the eponymous hero.

Paragraph 1
- Initially he is presented as materialistic.
- He arranges for his meeting with Daisy to take place at Nick's house, from which she can see the size and grandeur of Gatsby's mansion.
- At this meeting he also wears an extravagant and obviously expensive 'white flannel suit, [with] silver shirt, and gold-coloured tie', in a show of his wealth. 
- These suggest that he intends to impress her with material possessions.
- Contrasts strongly with the seemingly modest Gatsby that is seen throughout the rest of the novel.

Paragraph 2
- This is one of the ways in which Gatsby seems to try and come across differently at the start of chapter 5; he appears in that gaudy, flamboyant outfit in what is an obvious display of wealth and power.
- However, these clothes seem to be only a show of confidence - when Daisy first arrives for tea, Gatsby crumbles, returning to the somewhat reclusive, even shy state that we have seen before.
- Contrast of 'pale as death'/'he literally glowed' - change in Gatsby occurs in what seems like no time at all to the reader, and all because of his successful re-introduction to Daisy.
- These shifts in behaviour seen in Gatsby in chapter 5 are far more extreme than those seen in most of the rest of the novel.

Paragraph 3
- Nick's narrative, or at least the part which applies to Gatsby, changes at the start of chapter five in a way that highlights Gatsby's nervousness, before shifting back to the description of Gatsby as in control
- He describes him as appearing 'absent', talking 'blankly' and muttering replies in a ‘choked murmur’. However, these rather negative adverbs are replaced considerably more positive imagery as the reunion progresses, with Nick soon describing the ‘exultation’ that the meeting has evoked in Gatsby.
- The style of narrative used in chapter 5 contrasts the style used in the rest of the novel. This is another one of the ways in which Fitzgerald attempts to use this chapter to develop the readers’ understanding of Gatsby’s feelings for Daisy, as well as revealing the insecurities he clearly also has about her.

Paragraph 4
- The main purpose of chapter 5 is, it could be argued, to ascertain that Gatsby is only human, and that he suffers doubt, fear and uncertainty as readily as a poorer man – yet it is also these same flaws that allow him to feel the love he does for Daisy
- The initial presentation of his materialism in this chapter highlights that he is a flawed character, but the fact that it contrasts so starkly with his portrayal in the rest of the book suggests that it is Daisy who brings out this shallower side to him – however, it is also Daisy that causes his happier, ‘exuberant’ side of him to come to the fore.
- To conclude then, the portrayal of the title character in this chapter is indeed significantly different to that which we see in the rest of the novel, but it needs to be this way to draw our attention to the fact that whilst Gatsby is tragically flawed – and may appear at times to be shallow, materialistic and dull – he also has qualities that could be considered admirable.

Jamie Hesketh

Monday 20 February 2012

The Great Gatsby - PLAN: Contrast the portrayal of Gatsby in Chapter 5 and in the rest of the novel


PLAN: Contrast the portrayal of Gatsby in Chapter 5 and in the rest of the novel

Introduction:

Turning point in the novel; not just for how the reader views Nick as a narrator but also in his presentation of Gatsby - Gatsby is portrayed as the former character’s antithesis.

In comparison to Nick’s portrayal of the wealthy ‘elegant young rough-neck’s’ character whose mannerisms were peculiarly American...and punctilious’, Chapter 5 presents Gatsby in an unfamiliar light, predominantly exposing the change as a result of the Character’s naive and unconditional love for character Daisy Buchanan whom he has history with; revealed by Jordan Baker in Chapter four previously.



Paragraph 1:

Through Nick’s narration, Fitzgerald writes a love sick and nervous character, using the narrator’s direct observations of Gatsby’s exterior to portray...

·           ‘Looking at me with suppressed eagerness’ – calm confident exterior replaced with hidden anxiety.

·           Adverbs provide insight into Gatsby’s delivery of speech to emphasise the fundamental change in the character eg. ‘he said carelessly’ , ‘with reluctance’, ‘uncertainly, and hesitated’ – largely diverse from the character’s previous ‘polite  ... coolly...gentleman’ deliverance witnessed throughout the novel so far.



Paragraph 2:

Similar to Gatsby’s accounted dialogue throughout the start of Chapter five in comparison to the previous chapters of the novel, Fitzgerald continues to portray Gatsby in an abnormal state. The author uses description of physical appearance to enhance the effect Daisy has on the character.

·           ‘the front door opened nervously’ juxtaposed with ‘white flannel suit, silver shirt, and gold-coloured tie’ – Using confident, extravagant dress to show off his wealth in conjunction with his anxious reaction Nick reveals how Gatsby’s emotions places the character in a paradox, displaying an uncertainty of feelings – a revelation of Gatsby’s character not witnessed by the reader before.

·           Nick’s narration provides a visual report on Gatsby to emphasise how the character is unable to exude the confidence he previously possessed; ‘pale’ ‘dark signs of sleeplessness beneath his eyes’ – suggests worry, incompatible with the superficial care-free and lavish lifestyle lead by the wealthy.

·           Although written in First person narrative, Nick’s reserved judgement throughout the novel so far has lead to the adoption of a third person, omniscient tone - In Chapter 5 this tone is abolished when Daisy and Gatsby meet again in Nick’s home after 5 years of being separated, here for the first time Nick provides his personal opinion on Gatsby’s behaviour, breaking out ‘impatiently’ with ‘Your acting like a little boy... You’re rude’ – this outbreak of judgement from Nick emphasises Gatsby’s unusual behaviour.



Paragraph 3:

Despite Daisy’s effect on the character, Chapter five also reveals another side to Gatsby when asked about his wealth. Here, Gatsby unintentionally reveals a secretive side to his life.

·           When Nick asked what business Gatsby was in his answer was ‘That’s my affair’ – an abrupt cold reply; showing how the character is secretive and reluctant to expose his line of work, linking to Chapter four and his involvement with Meyer Wolfsheim: Gambler.





Paragraph 4:

The last half of the chapter shines hope on the character with Fitzgerald’s use of pathetic fallacy when ‘It’s stopped raining’ as the ironic positive ‘turning point’ in the novel for Gatsby as he wins Daisy over, maintaining the character’s momentarily forgotten confidence.

·       Hedonistic approach to life re-exposed – in comparison to the nervous disposition earlier on, Gatsby adopts a confident stance through showing off his wealth to Daisy in order to boost both his and her pleasure instantly – ‘he took out a pile of shirts and began throwing them ... before us ... the soft rich heap mounted higher’ – gaining her approval through the materialistic admiration of his belongings.

·       His obsession of Daisy is noted by Nick’s observation that ‘He hadn’t once ceased looking at Daisy’ and ‘his hand took hold of Daisy’s’ – this intimacy portrayed by the character highlights the love he holds for Daisy, a complete turnaround from the opposite approach towards his Guests at his numerous parties where he keeps his distance, not getting involved and becoming the subject of gossip, expressed in Chapter three.

·       Use of Verisimilitude throughout all Chapters – ‘dull gold’ – in Chapter five, serves as a metaphor to show how Gatsby’s wealth may not be as it seems; linking with his secrecy of his business and his past i.e. In Chapter 4 when Gatsby presents Nick with the decoration from ‘little Montenegro’, taking an unknown medal however making it seem more than it is – symbolising Gatsby as a character and how his life looks better than it is with his large parties and ‘celebrated’ friends.

Caitlin Scott

The Kite Runner- Chapter 20

What Happens:

  • Amir and Farid travel from Jalalabad to Kabul
  • There they encounter a beggar who claims to have known Amir's mother
  • Amir encounters the Taliban for the first time
  • They reach the orphanage and meet Zaman, its director
  • Zaman reveals that he allows the Taliban to take children from the orphanage in order to minimise the danger for those that are not taken
Analysis:
The chapter can be divided into two distinct parts: the beginning, up until page 221, explores Kabul both as it was, as shown by Amir's memories, and as it is, directly, through description. The horrors that Amir witnesses in Kabul are highlighted, not by any in-depth description, but rather by contrasting it with how he remembers Kabul, "in the old days," a phrase that is repeated when describing the city. Amir is introduced to a changed city, one where the smell of Kabob in the, "old days" is replaced by diesel from people trying t heat their homes, page 216.

When Amir meets the Taliban, the entire episode is dealt with in a single paragraph, and the complex use of contrast is ditched here for a more straightforward adjectival approach to description: "black," "dark-skinned," "thick, knitted," "tobacco-stained," page 217. This relatively simple and short paragraph mirrors the Taliban's approach to governing; they are simple, and they only stay for a short time.

The encounter with the beggar serves to deepen the tragedy of the fallen city, showing that, "the desert weed lives on, but the flower of spring blooms and wilts," page 218. He also lends a glimmer of hope to Amir that he may learn more of his mother, a glimmer that is never followed up.

The second part of the chapter, starting at 221, is the conversation between Amir, Farid and Zaman about the orphanage. Farid and Zaman fight, which shows a depth and a ferocity to his character, and at the end, Zaman has, "put on his broken glasses," page 225, which shows the he tries to remain looking strong despite his broken life. However, this part mainly serves to move the plot along, and it is revealed that Zaman sells children to a Talib official so that he doesn't take more than one. He also tells Amir where he can find this official, at the Ghazi Stadium, page 225.

The Kite Runner - Chapter 16

What Happens
  • Rahim Khan tells the story that surrounds Hassan after Amir and Baba emigrate to America
  • We learn that Hassan has a son
  • Told briefly about the Taliban 
Analysis

Chapter 16 marks a brief change in narration from Amir to Rahim Khan, this has several implications on the way in which the chapter is told. Several details about Hassan are learnt throughout the chapter, showing how Amir has neglected his greatest childhood friend in a selfish act of distancing. The revelation that Hassan has a son puts the events of the past into the present, effecting events that happen beyond the end of the chapter and shows the psychological transition which Amir has to undergo. This transition is typical of the Bildungsroman genre.    

The chapter acts as a self contained story told through a very different perspective than the previous chapters, giving a first hand account of the suffering and loss that Amir has been trying to "bury". Through Khan's story Amir is instantly submerged in the events of his past and left contemplating the events of his future, although as the chapter is ultimately told by Khan, it is up to the readers imagination to interpret Amir's reaction as the narration does not allow for interruptions. Furthermore the first hand account acts as a gentle introduction to a war savaged Afghanistan, with references to the famine and the Taliban.

The account also remains bespoke around Amir's past, with Khan reminding Amir about, "what a good kite runner Hassan was", and mentioning how, "they would hand the kites they ran all winter on the walls". Hassan's fate is still ambiguous at the end of the chapter, with Hosseni adopting a show not tell mentality, leaving the chapter on a suspense filled anticlimax.

Saturday 18 February 2012

The Kite Runner - Chapter 15

Key Events -
- Journey to Rahim Khan's home
- We find out that Rahim Khan is dying. (Same symptoms as Baba - highlights the loss of a second father)
- Hassan is brought back into the novel

How does Hosseini tell the story? -
- At the beginning of the chapter, Hosseini uses multi-sensory description and takes his time to describe the scenery in significant detail and by doing this it shows the contrast between how things have changed since Amir's time in America.
- Hosseini makes reference to Amir's past in America when discussing cliché's in relation to the 'elephant in the room' with Amir and Rahim Khan.
- Like most chapters both languages are used however more words are italicised to show how Amir is no longer in America but back in his home country of Afghanistan.
- 'Then a thing made of skin and bones pretending to be Rahim Khan opened the door' - This sentence is separated from the rest of the novel giving the reader time to acknowledge the difference in the country Amir used to know which is in comparison to how Amir hasn't changed, how he still lives in the past.

Key Quotes -
- 'Then a thing made of skin and bones pretending to be Rahim Khan opened the door'
- 'The news had reached Kabul and he had called' - When talking about Baba's death.
- 'Rahim Khan had always been one of the most instinctive people I'd ever met'
- "You sounded like your father just now"


Friday 17 February 2012

Analyse the significance of references to songs in the novel


The Love Nest

"Shall we build for pride? Or,
Shall brick and mortar hold
worth and love inside?"
  • Shows the confusion of whether or not the love between Gatsby and Daisy is made of feelings or materialistic gain. Earlier when Gatsby talks of holding the meeting at Nick’s house so that Daisy can see how grand his own mansion is, illustrates his pride in what he has achieved, and how he thinks that he is more likely to win back Daisy’s affections by money and grandeur, than who he is and his personal ‘worth and love’.
  • However, when Daisy and Gatsby enter the music room, Klipspriner has just played ‘The Love Nest’ on the piano, implying how it could be now that the self-indulgent way of thinking has left the two lovers, and that they are considering whether there is more to life than the hedonism implied through the rest of the novel.


Ain’t we got fun?

"Every morning,
Every evening,
Ain't we got fun?
There's nothing surer,
The rich get richer and the poor get children.
In the meantime,
In between time,
Ain't we got fun!"
  • The inclusion of the lyrics of this song highlights how now that Gatsby has Daisy back in his life and has seen that perhaps his mansion and wealth does not mean as much as he thought to her, that nothing matters anymore.
  • It perhaps also implies his ignorance at how quickly he assumes that all is well. The flippant attitude to anything but ‘fun’ in the song could symbolise his child-like, shallow approach to winning Daisy back, and how he presumes that everything from here onwards will be simple because the only thing of true value to him is Daisy.

Sheik of Araby

“Well I'm the sheik of Araby.
Your love belongs to me.
At night where you're asleep
Into your tent I'll creep – “
  • These particular words from the piece of Jazz music show how Gatsby views Tom and Daisy’s relationship and how he feels  Daisy’s love actually ‘belongs’ to Gatsby. Jordan explains after the words have been sung that Gatsby deliberately bought the mansion so that ‘Daisy would be just across the bay’.  The closeness of the two houses of the lovers are the ‘tents’ because they are in ‘creeping’ distance of each other. It foreshadows the affair before it has begun.
  • The improvisational style of Jazz music could also symbolise how nobody really knows what is going to happen next because the instrument that improvises changes its melody each time the accompaniment is played. This could illustrate the life-style of the characters in the play in the way that they live for the moment – whatever they feel like doing at that instant, they do. 

Three o’clock in the morning – (this is not mentioned in the book, but is included in the film and it seems to have some significance still from the time that it was written – in 1922)

"My heart keeps beating in time,
Sounds like an old sweet love tune,
Say that there soon will be a honeymoon."
  • This song could be interpreted to be a metaphor for how an old relationship has been rekindled, and that both Gatsby and Daisy’s hearts are still ‘beating in time’ with one another.
  • The suggestion that ‘there will soon be a honeymoon’ implies that that their meeting was the start of a wonderful time of love for them. However, it could also be interpreted that the lyrics are foretelling the tragedy that is to come, as it is also known that ‘honeymoon’ periods must come to an end.   
(Hannah James)

Wednesday 15 February 2012

The Kite Runner- Chapter 18

Summary
  • Sinking realisation of the truth about Baba being Hassan's father
  • Confirmation of Amir's trip to Kabul
Analysis
             At the beginning of the chapter Hosseini uses pathetic fallacy to highlight Amir's mood; bruised and angry. To tell the story Khaled Hosseini writes Amir as an introspective, self-aware narrator, this makes the story more realistic and includes the reader in the events. There is repetitionof the word 'wept' and then again written in italics to highlight the narrators anger and realisation of all the events leading up to this moment. Hosseini uses foreshadowing with the 'brass balls', which can be cross referenced with page 253 further on in the novel. This is also ironic as this is what Sohrab uses to save Amir's life at that point in the novel.
             The italics throughout this chapter also highlight the memories/flashbacks and realisations that Amir is having that help to concrete the fact that Baba is also Hassan's father. Arguably during this chapter there is evidence of Amir's first act of selflessness, when he states 'Rahim Khan had summoned me here to atone not just for my sins but for Baba's too. At this point he recognises that he may have to do this for someone else and not that it isnt just about him (being careful not to treat Amir as a real person). Hosseini also uses rhetorical questions to present Amir as an intraspective/ retraspective first person narrator. Finally, throughout short sentences are used to highlight emotions such as shock, anger and realisation.

Tuesday 14 February 2012

the kite runner - chapter 21

The Kite Runner- chapter 21

Key events

  • Amir returns to the Wazir Akbar Khan district accompanied by Farid 
  • Amir visits his old house for the first time since he had left Kabul
  • at the football match Amir has a meeting set up for him with the ' Talib in sunglasses' as this is who Amir believes has Sohrab 
Chapter 21 begins with Amir returning to the Wazir Akbar Khan area of Kabul. On arrival Amir notices clear differences from what he remembered and what the area is like now, for example 'a haze of dust covered the city and its sun-dried brick buildings'.
The chapter then progresses as Amir returns to his old house. Here we get the sense that Amir is looking back into his past and thinking about all the things that he had done at the house with Hassan or Baba. 
At the football match a man and woman were brought out at half time onto the pitch. the man, blindfolded, was put into a specially dug hole and was then stoned  by the Talib in the black sunglasses until he died. At the end of the chapter Farid organises a meeting for Amir with the 'Talib in sunglasses'

The Kite Runner - Chapter 14

What Happens:

- Rahim Khan's phone call.

How Hosseini tells the story:

The chapter revolves around the phone call and how 'the past claws its way out.' (P1). Amir find himself in a difficult situation of whether returning to Pakistan is a good idea; this is not explicitly mentioned but can be found in 'Plight of the wolves'. Aflatoon/ Plato is introduced to us at this point, who was named by the General ; Plato was a philosopher who came up with the idea of recurring themes; this is the idea that the amount of interest fathers take in their sons will influence how the boy turns out. This can be applied to Amir and Baba in that Amir was not given much attention in the earlier years of his life as Baba was always working or did not care for Amir's company, this would have most likely led to Amir's timidness. The idea can also be applied to Hassan and Sohrab in that Sohrab grows up to be like his father as he was nurtured by him. The reference of Plato could be a use foreshadowing Sohrab's skill with a slingshot even though the reader by this point would not know about him.

We find more more relations to the past when Amir reflects. The kites re-appear 'The red with long blue tails' which is all that need be said for the reader to understand Amir's thoughts, but also the father and son playing football could be linked to the two boys playing with the football when Amir is searching for Hassan.

Amir finds out what he feared the most but already knew, that Rahim Khan knows all about what he did; this is not explicitly mentioned but can be derived from 'Come, there is a way to be a good again'.
This comment foreshadows what will happen; but it appears that Amir does not think about what the way is but reflects still on what happened.

Amir slips back into his insomnia with the presence of the 'moonlight pouring through the blinds' which can be cross referenced back to chapter 8 where he cannot sleep in Jallalabad. Amir would most likely see the 'way to be good again' as the way to break free of the plight; and to return the favour of 'a thousand times over'.

The Kite Runner - chapter 19

What happens :
  • Amir and Farid travel to Pakistan
  • Stay with Farid's brother
How Hosseini tells the story:
Not a lot actually happens in this chapter yet it manages to add to the novel a lot as it is constantly being infused with the past. The first aspect that notices in this chapter is the increased use of Afghan language. This tells the reader that we have re-entered this part of Amir's life and are now almost slipping back into his past. The narrator, Amir, sometimes doesn't even translate the language, leaving the reader to work out what is being said independently. This allows the reader to become more entwined in what is happening in the novel.

This chapter is also very sectioned with breaks in the text and a change of scenery or time. This constant changing allows the reader to see how Amir's frame of mind is constantly changing. There is also a small section of dialogue that is sectioned off. This adds to the novel and how it is being told as it is told as a memory and only certain points are remembered in life such as the bits of a trip that stick out. This is what Hosseini is doing in this chapter, telling the parts of the journey that would stick out in Amir's memory later on.

There is also the use of a dream in this chapter. This highlights Amir's guilt by using short, factual snetances but infuses some imagery within them such as the metephor 'vast, cavernous emptiness.' By putting this part in italics it shows the reader that this is a dream and separates it from the rest of the chapter. Finally the use of the imagery to describe the moon reminds the reader of Amir's reason for being in Pakistan. He describes it as a 'bony glow of a half-moon.' By making it a half moon it instantly reiterates the idea of Hassan as he is his half brother. Also the way it is said to be 'bony' makes the reader think of death and this could be Hosseini showing the reader Amir's realisation of why he is back in Pakistan.

The chapter ends with yet another reference to a past occurance in the novel with Amir putting money under a mattress. He recognises that he has done this before but this time it is for a good cause. This could heighten the idea of being 'good again' to the reader.

The Exam and the Assessment Objectives explained, I hope...


Below is some information about the exam. I have spoken to a few of you and it seems it would be useful to clarify what the examiner is looking for. I have also broken down the Assessment Objectives in italics. I hope this is useful. 
Remember, most of you do the AOs naturally, so don't deliberate over them, or lose sleep, just be aware of them...

Mode of Assessment
Assessment will be by one written paper of 2 hours’ duration. There will be two sections to the paper, Section
A and Section B. Candidates will be required to answer one question from each section. Each question will be
marked out of 42, giving an overall maximum mark for the paper of 84 marks.
Section A will have one question on each of the set texts, each question having two parts. Candidates will
answer one question on one text. Each question will require candidates to:
• comment in detail on the narrative method of an extract
• relate this extract to wider concerns within the text as a whole.
Section B will have two questions. Both questions will require candidates to compare aspects of narrative
across three texts that they have studied. Candidates will answer one question. The three texts written about
must not include the text referred to in Section A.
Candidates are permitted to take their texts into the examination. This allows candidates to be pointed to
sections of texts in Section A, and to refresh their memories of the form and structure of texts for Section B.
It must be stressed that the open book format does not remove from candidates the requirement that they
know the texts well and can refer to them in detail.
Texts taken into the examination must be clean, that is, free from annotation.



AO1 Articulate creative, informed and relevant responses to literary texts, using appropriate terminology and concepts, and coherent, accurate written expression.

You need to write fluently, structuring your essay carefully. You should guide your reader through a clear line of argument, using sophisticated vocabulary and critical terminology. You need to show a knowledge of the whole text and embed quotations frequently. 

AO2 Demonstrate detailed critical understanding in analysing the ways in which structure, form and language shape meanings in literary texts.

To ensure you are prepared for this you should practise writing in analytical sentences. Follow this formula for practise, but find your own way too: write an analytical sentences, embedding a quotation or close reference and analyse how the author uses the feature in question, and evaluate it. 

AO3 Explore connections and comparisons between different literary texts, informed by interpretations of other readers.


If you are making connections or comparisons, don't make generic ones, be specific. Make sure you focus on the connections and comparisons and make them clear; the question will usually give you a focus, if choosing a Section B question. You have to appreciate difference and similarity between texts and recognise other interpretations. For example, you might look at critical views, or what others have said in lessons. For The Great Gatsby, you might suggest that it is ironic that Nick might have totally misread the whole story. Instead of Gatsby being the tragic hero of a romantic love story, he might just be a victim of a criminal world he didn't quite master. 


AO4 Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which literary texts are written and received.

You need to show you know the context of production and reception. Know what went on before the text was written, and how people responded to the text. You should also know about the writers of the texts you have studied. Read over your notes and do some further research if necessary. 

For example, for The Great Gatsby, awareness of the First World War and its impact on the American Economy and the American psyche is essential. You need to show you understand the American Dream and the significance of the symbolism of East and West America. Know what men's attitudes towards women were. 
NB: You have done loads of this in early lessons.


If there is anything that you find confusing, use what is above to make some notes; I am happy to look over them and give feedback. 

The Great Gatsby- Some Key Quotations and Explanations

Here are some of the key quotations in the novel, with some points about them. If you find others, add them...

"...life is much more successfully looked at from a single window, after all." (p.10)

This metaphor suggests one needs to concentrate on one aspect of life. This also serves as a metaphor for Fitzgerald's narrative technique; a single narrator who is given glimpses into other people's lives. As a reader we must be aware of Nick, the unreliable narrator. The novel is full of verisimilitudes.

"I was within and without, simultaneously enchanted and repelled by the inexhaustible variety of life." (p.37)

Nick is paradoxically within and without. He fits in but feels he doesn't belong. The quotation sums up the partially involved narrator created by Fitzgerald.
This statement seems to also link to Fitzgerald's own attitude towards the Roaring Twenties.


"On a Sunday morning while the church bells rang...the world and its mistress returned to Gatsby's house and twinkled hilariously on his lawn." (p.60)

We are specifically told that Sabbath Day is is celebrated with parties. Gatsby seeks mystical union, but not with God; he hopes his parties will bring him closer to Daisy. Faith has been replaced by 'twinkling', a superficial hilarity.

"...the rock of the world was founded securely on a fairy's wing..." (p.96)

This concrete image describes the impossibility of Gatsby's dreams coming true. As a teenager, Gatsby imagined "the most grotesque and fantastic conceits." Gatsby, however, persuaded himself that he could build a future upon them; a dream as hopeless as balancing a rock on a fairy's wing.


"...he had committed himself to the following of a grail." (p.142)

With this metaphor, Nick romantically links Daisy and Gatsby to the Arthurian legend. The Holy Grail was the legendary cup in which Joseph of Arimathea caught the blood of Christ on the cross. In Arthurian legend, only the purist of knights were able to undertake the sacred quest to find the grail.

"They were careless people, Tom and Daisy- they smashed up things...and then retreated back into their money or their vast carelessness..." (p.170)

Nick's judgement could be interpreted as Fitzgerald's view on the Roaring Twenties.  Fitzgerald wrote to Marya Mannes, a friend: "The young in America are brave, shallow, cynical, impatient and empty. I like them not...America is so decadent that its brilliant children are damned almost before they are born."

"So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly to the past." (p.172)

This serves as a metaphor. The pursuit of the American dream and an ideal future was imperative, but, in reality the dream is a hope of recovering the past. Nick is aware that the dream isn't achievable, but paradoxically, he still strives towards it. Americans pursue the dream, only to find that, like Nick, they must go back to their past.

Thursday 2 February 2012

The Kite Runner Chapter Summaries

Chapter 1          Chapter 2          Chapter 3         Chapter 4
Chapter 5          Chapter 6          Chapter 7         Chapter 8
Chapter 9          Chapter 10        Chapter 11       Chapter 12
Chapter 13        Chapter 14        Chapter 15       Chapter 16
Chapter 17        Chapter 18        Chapter 19       Chapter 20
Chapter 21        Chapter 22        Chapter 23       Chapter 24
Chapter 25